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Nytewalker
10-25-2005, 08:49 AM
I'm in an odd mood today. I felt like writing some poetry. Anyone else have something to share?

Senseless

He looks in your eyes,
frozen in each other's gaze,
He sees you, I can't.

The smell of your hair,
Your perfume for him alone,
He smells you, I can't.

Last he hears at night,
"sweet dreams darling, I love you"
He hear you, I can't.

The tase of your lips,
different flavored chapsticks,
He tastes you, I can't.

Caressing your face,
Buried in your silken hair,
He feels you, I can't.

Finishes your words,
knowing everything you are,
He knows you, I can't.

All the six of these,
You and he share together,
I am left senseless.

Nyte

Starfire
10-25-2005, 11:29 AM
Nyte are you female or male?

Nytewalker
10-25-2005, 11:31 AM
Ouch dude... Ouch.

Male

Starfire
10-25-2005, 12:59 PM
I'm in an odd mood today. I felt like writing some poetry. Anyone else have something to share?

Senseless

He looks in your eyes,
frozen in each other's gaze,
He sees you, I can't.

The smell of your hair,
Your perfume for him alone,
He smells you, I can't.

Last he hears at night,
"sweet dreams darling, I love you"
He hear you, I can't.

The tase of your lips,
different flavored chapsticks,
He tastes you, I can't.

Caressing your face,
Buried in your silken hair,
He feels you, I can't.

The He's threw me off before I paid attention to the I's.

Sorry man. :lmao:

Nytewalker
10-25-2005, 03:48 PM
Guess no one liked it. :cry: